Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts
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Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Week 4 Storytelling: Bharat, A Future Undecided

“My sweetest husband, I believe it is time to retire to the forest,” Shakuntala said gently to Dushmanta, her husband of twenty years.

“Though I enjoy the life of the palace, a hermitage is my home, and my aging body yearns for it,” she continued.

“For you, my dearest wife, I would do anything. But how should we know if our offspring is ready for the heavy duties of a king? How will we know if it is still too much for him? What if he is an unjust King, how will I live?” Dushmanta emotionally asked.

“We will test him.” Shakuntala stated, as if a light had come on, for she glowed with the essence of her idea.

“I’ve got it!” he yelled. “We will see if it is his heart of gold he will lead with, or if he has selfish intentions. We will send him to Jabro, the poorest area of our city, and put him with a harsh servant who does not do all he asks, as he is used to. She will be our eyes; only then will we see the true heart our son possesses.”

“Very well, my greatest, see it through,” Shakuntala stated, after pondering idea. It seemed harsh, but in the end, it truly would test his temper, as well as his compassion for others.

So Dushmanta went to his favorite nurse, Jana, and asked if she knew anyone that would be fit to fulfill this deed. As it would be, she did: a fellow nurse by the name of Seila. She was an older woman, but not frail. She was strong and level-headed. Dushmanta and Shakuntala met with Seila and explained all they needed from her. She feared them initially (because of their royal status), but she realized by the end that all they wanted was to know that their son was truly ready to rule a kingdom.

The following week Bharat showed up to the home he would be staying at while conducting royal duties his father set for him. When he got out of the chariot he stood curiously at the door, and read the name of the inn repeatedly. It was nothing more than a shack, and he wondered if someone even lived there. Nevertheless, he decided to go in.

“Hello? Is anyone here? I was told I am to be expected.  My name is Bharat,” he stated as he walked through the door. His eyes widened.  The decor did not improve from outside to in; it actually got worse!

“I am Seila. And look here! You didn’t even wipe your shoes off!” a woman smarled as she turned the corner. “Go through that door there and set your stuff down, and then please come help me wash up for dinner.” She pointed to a sheet on the wall over a hole that Bharat could only assume was the door spoken of.

“Madam…” Bharat began, but he soon decided it was not worth the words. He did not believe she meant to be harsh, but rather, firm. He was about to remind her who he was, but he wanted to see how the night went. He set his belongings on the cot and returned to the main room.

Seila put a pot of chicken on the kindled fire. “Please finish the washing of these dishes and when you’re done let’s head to the river for the some cool drinks.” 

Bharat considered what his father and mother would do in this situation. Despite the small fire brewing inside him, he realized that she had lived a life much harder than his, and she deserved to be a little bitter. Maybe he could help her out.

Finally, he walked over to the grand pot with dirty dishes in it and began cleaning them.

"I must find a way to help this woman," he thought to himself. "What can I do to show her that we, the royal family, still care for her?"

Bharat and Seila cleaned and cooked in silence, until Bharat broke had an idea.

“Dearest Seila, it is clear you have lived a hard and tiresome life, but you have stayed devoted to your King through it all. For that, I want to give you my favorite ring.” He removed the diamond-encrusted gold band from his finger, and placed it in her palm.

She stood wide-eyed, in shock. She did not expect this at all.

From the moment Dushmanta and Shakuntala found out their son’s great reverence, they knew his purity of heart was true. Dushmanta made Bharat the King, and his reign was peaceful.  He was such a great king that the country of India still bears his name today.

Indian King (Wikipedia)


Author's Note. This story is a small piece of a larger story, with the main piece coming from Nine Ideal Indian Women: Sita, Promila, and Shakuntala.  This idea came from the third story, Shakuntala.  I was so entranced during this story that I'm not sure if I blinked the whole way through!   I enjoyed the plot and story line too much, so I decided not to make any changes to those.  Instead, I decided to add a little fill where there was nothing more than a paragraph (the one at the end where Bharat suddenly grows up, becomes king, and has a great reign).  

The ring in this story was not selected by chance; in the story of Shakuntala and Dushmanta, Dushmanata married Shakuntala in the forest and gives her a ring so his men could come back and get her.  He became cursed to forget the one he loved until a token of his love (the ring!) was shown to him.  Shakuntala lost it, and Dushmanta did not recognize her when she went to find him while very pregnant with their son, Bharat.  A few years later, some fisherman find the ring and it is returned to Dushmanta.  Once he sees the ring, he realizes what he had done and he finds Shakuntala and Bharat.  Later in life, Dushmanta gave this ring to Bharat.  This is why this ring is so important!  

The picture I selected was done so very carefully.  I did many searches for both Bharat and Shakuntala, where I almost always attained the same few pictures that I had already seen (though they didn't fit the idea I had in my head).  I finally got the idea to look up Indian Kings, and I went through a few before I found a picture of one I thought looked noble enough to look similar to the gentle King Bharat.  If you want to read more about King Shivaji (pictured), see here.


Bibliography. This story's characters come from Nine Ideal Indian Women: Sita, Promila, and Shakuntala by Sunity Devee in 1919.

Week 4 Reading Diary, continued: Nine Ideal Indian Women: Sita, Promila, and Shakuntala

Title: Nine Ideal Indian Women: Sita, Promila, and Shakuntala
Author: Sunity Devee
Year: 1919

Part B: Promila and Shakuntala

Indrajit’s Rage

This is slightly gruesome, but I could write a story where the kingdom sent repeated messengers to tell Indrajit of the grave state of Lanka and his giant brother, but he never believed them and killed them. Then, finally, someone he knows, his sweet old nurse as a child comes, and he believes her. This is nothing more than an expansion on the current story, giving it a more detailed reason as to why he wouldn’t believe anyone.

Promila – The Alternate Ending 

The ending of this broke my heart. Even though they were technically the bad guys, the writers of this story really made me root for Indrajit and Promila’s love. Though still sad, this alternate ending would consist of Indrajit still dying (because, well, he has to so Rama can win), but Promila becomes a strong woman, and lives out her days with her maidens in paradise. I could discuss how she came to this decision, and the journey back. 
Promila and Her Maidens (Nine Ideal Indian Women)


Bharat Becomes King

In this side story, I would show the transition to when Bharat, the son of Dushmanta and Shakuntala, goes from prince to King. Maybe a series of tests? Or his father is waiting for something specific? Maybe someone made a prediction on what Dushmanta and Shakuntala were looking for to know the time their son should be king. I plan on making his demeanor and attitude to all people the same that his mothers would be. At the end, Dushmanta and Shakuntala will retire to the forest as hermits, just as the prediction.

Saturday, February 6, 2016

Week 4 Reading Diary: Nine Ideal Indian Women: Sita, Promila, and Shakuntala

Title: Nine Ideal Indian Women: Sita, Promila, and Shakuntala
Author: Sunity Devee
Year: 1919

Rama and Sita (taken from Nine Ideal Indian Women)


Rama’s Side of the Story


How was Rama feeling when he was about to pull the bow? This is what I wondered the entire time I was reading the part where all the people were attempting to pull the bow. The book gives Sita’s account, thoughts, and prayers, but not Rama’s. I think this would make a great story for storytelling; showing how Rama felt walking up to the bow, grabbing it, looking at Sita. I could describe the palace, the bow, and Sita, but all from Rama’s point of view.

A Day in the Life of Sita: A Captive

What does Sita see while she is in the cage? How do the Rakshasa's treat her? How is Samara able to visit, and where did she come from? I had many question while reading the parts where Samara was visiting with Sita. I found out Samara is Bibhisan’s wife, and Bibhisan is Ravana’s brother (though he sided with Rama in the war). I could go into further detail on their gossip and doings. Also, Samara could bring her things and food to keep her healthy despite being punished by the rakshasi’s.

Sita’s Disappearance

The part where Sita gets sucked into the earth was much more descriptive in this story. It made a lot more sense here than in the PDE Ramayana, but it made it that much harder to read. I think it would be a good story to elaborate on how Sita went into the earth. It would not be super long in terms of story time, but it would be incredibly descriptive, describing what people were feeling a
nd seeing.