Showing posts with label Week 3. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 3. Show all posts

Thursday, February 4, 2016

Week 3 Storytelling: Being Kumbhakarna

Being Kumbhakarna

“I’m hungry.” Karna sighed. His real name was Kumbhakarna, but his friends called his Karna. He was over 100 feet tall, but in human form. He hated being so big; it wasn’t fair. He grabbed another berry bush, shook them all into his mouth, and tossed it a mile or so away. He had already eaten 20 deer for breakfast and lunch, but it just wasn’t enough.

He did not like being a Rakshasa. Ravana was so mean and powerful; he acted like his parent just because he was the king of the Rakshasa’s. Because of Ravana, Karna was trying to hide in the forest. He didn’t want to eat anyone else. When Ravana had a prisoner he wanted to disappear he made Karna eat them! He threatened that if he didn’t, he would take away all his food for a week, which was persuasion enough to poor Karna, who was always hungry.

Boom Crunch! Boom Crunch!
With every step, he felt as if he might we waking the whole world. He saw a large boulder and took a seat. He began to weep uncontrollably. His tears fell like a river amongst the ancient trees, and began to flow through the land.

Suddenly, the God Indra came riding in on his white elephant.

“Karna! You are flooding the forest! Pretty soon, there will be no food left!” Indra yelled. Karna’s sobs were much too loud to hear Indra. The water was so high that the flow was beginning to bend the trees.

Indra did not like Karna. He was too large, making him capable of incredible, possibly terrible, things. Indra threw his lightning thunderbolt as hard as he could at Karna’s shoulder. He did not want to kill him, just get his attention.

Karna was hit suddenly, and his self-pity turned to anger.

“Who dare attack the mighty Karna!” His voice boomed throughout the forest as far as the eye could see.

Indra pushed past the burst of air that came from Karna.

“I did Karna! But I did it not to hurt you! You could not hear me yelling, and you were flooding all the land!” Indra yelled, trying to keep the peace.

Karna did not want to hear his explanation. This man hurt him! Why would he do such a thing? He swung his mighty hand down to grab the attacker, and held him up high into the air. He did not recognize his crazy man who would wound a giant, but he would teach him.

Indra had had enough. “Karna, because of your raging anger, you will now sleep half a years moons and Suns at a time, only waking to feast. This will keep you from hurting anyone with your stature and temper!”

Suddenly Karna’s eyes became incredibly heavy. He began to fall, as if in slow motion. Indra made it safely to the ground via the cushion of Karna’s massive hand in the fall. Conveniently, Karna’s head landed on the boulder gently as if it were made to be his pillow. A loud snore bellowed from the beast, and until his demise, the curse stayed put.

Indra walked away, smirking. Finally, I have rid of this horrid beast.


Author’s Note: Kumbhakarna was the brother of Ravana (the Rakshasa King) in the Ramayana. In the legend, Kumbhakarna had the curse to sleep for 6 months at a time because of a misheard boon. I decided to change it up, and, because Indra doesn’t like Kumbhakarna, still make Indra the reason he must sleep for eternity, but have it happen in a different way.

Bibliography. This is based on the character Kumbhakarna in the PDE Ramayana.

Monday, February 1, 2016

Week 3 Reading Diary, continued: PDE Ramayana, Part D

These are my notes for sections 61-80 in the PDE Ramayana (Part D). Here I have come up with three more options for week 3 Storytelling assignment.

Being Kubhakarna

For some reason I felt bad for the giant. I know he was not nice, but what if it was because of the curse put on him to just sleep and eat? In this storytelling idea, I would talk about a day in the life of a giant (pre-curse and war). The ending could be what happened that forced him to get cursed.


Brahma’s Weapon
This story would fit right in with my Storybook idea of celestial weapons. The first was when Rama was granted access to weapons to defeat the Rakshasa’s during his exile. This weapon is one that Brahma created out of fire so that the Rakshasa king Ravana could be defeated. With the grand story behind this weapon, it could be a story on it’s own.

Alternate Ending

I absolutely hated how this story ended. Maybe I am just too modern, but Rama is a chauvinistic jerk who is entitled and entirely subject to peer pressure. He saw Sita in her purity, and it was proved, but he still chose to listen to those around him. In my ending, I would resume after she proves herself in the fire, then let them go back to the palace. When people tried to question her, Rama would stand up for the woman he married, and that would be the end of that gossip. They would still have twins, and Valmiki would have moved to the palace for guidance in the children’s lives. This would still give an end where the Ramayana became a song and was passed on for generations.

Thursday, January 28, 2016

Week 3 Reading Diary, continued: PDE Ramayana, Part C

These are my notes for sections 41-60 in the PDE Ramayana (Part C). Here I have come up with three options for week 3 Storytelling assignment.

Rama Beats Vali

I do understand why this section is controversial. Rama is in complete hiding watching two equals fight (most likely to the death of one) and he intervenes with no announcement to create a victor. In this possible storytelling option, I would expand on what happened when Rama beat Vali. Due to the controversial nature of this portion of the Ramayana, I believe it would be a good idea to give Rama a reason for why he did what he did. The idea I came up with is to focus on the fact that Rama’s father said he is explicitly not allowed to enter a city during the fourteen years. Vali wouldn’t come out just seeing Sugriva, so Rama had to be stealthy.

Sampati Getting Wings

This option would be to tangent out from the current ending of Sampati’s story. It could be Rama and Sita on their journey home, and Rama sees Sampati and, knowing the story, grants him his wings. It could include Sita and Rama’s gratitude in his aid in finding Rama’s bride.

Hanuman’s Tail

I truly enjoyed this portion of the story. I loved how Sita had empathy for Hanuman, and wanted to save him the pain. I also love his ingenious idea of taking his punishment and punishing Lanka tenfold in return. I feel this portion of the Ramayana was much too short, and has many options to be expanded on or added.