Saturday, February 27, 2016

Week 7 Reading Diary: continued, Epified TV in India (Part B)

Title: Epified TV in India
Author(s): Unknown
Created: April 2015
Bhima fighting Bakasura the rakshasa (Wiki)

The book did not cover the many trainers Karna tried to attain in archery. He was not able to because he was not of the right status. It is crazy how when two people are not of the same status that they are not allowed to interact. The sad part is that if the “lower” is better than the “upper”, then the lower is punished.

In this story, the Pandavas were able to escape the fire, but no one was actually in this fire. In the book, there was another five men and a woman who were killed in their place.

In Episode 24, Bhima was shown to be the greatest hero in keeping the pandavas and their mother alive. I did not know that he did all these great things for his family. A story similar to this would be good for storytelling. I also enjoyed the story about Bhima killing the rakshasa.

A good story from Episode 27 would be when Duryodhana tries to lift Drupada’s bow. What was going through his head, what he looked like, and how he felt after are just a few of the things that could be covered.

What it would be like to be a person from Hastinapura that goes to live in the Pandavas new city. This is a completely different idea from my typical. It would be the outside point of view of the Pandavas, and how awesome they might have seemed to the people. From the eyes of a child would be very neat as well.

Friday, February 26, 2016

Week 7 Reading Diary: Epified TV in India (Part A)

Title: Epified TV in India
Author(s): Unknown
Created: April 2015

Bhishma steals the three princesses

I did not realize Bhishma stole Amba, Amica, and Ambalica. I also thought it very odd that Amba could not go back to the man she loved. She was never with or married to any of the men, so I don’t quite understand why he would not take her. I also did not realize that Amba is a strong reason in everything that happened to Bhishma.

Kunthi

I just realized that the story of Karna sounds very similar to the Christian story of Moses. A baby who could not be kept that the mother knew was destined for great things. I did not notice while reading the Mahabharata that there is such a timeline hole with Karna (basically his whole life until the last ~ten years). This might be a good storytelling.

The 100 Sons

I had no idea about the lump born to Gandhari that became the 100 evil sons. It is actually quite gross to think about. I know there could be many stories that come from this weirdness.

Duryodhana pushed Bhima into the water! In the Mahabharata, this specific story did not happen. This just made me hate Duryodhana that much more. Video 15 would be such a great story to embellish. I wish I had read more about this in the book.
Bhima (Wiki)

Astras were briefly mentioned when they discussed Drona. I have read multiple students stories about astras and I think it would be neat to write one of my own. Maybe this time I will try doing so with a different storytelling method.

Thursday, February 25, 2016

Week 6 Storytelling: Uttarai's Sacrifice

An Indian Wedding (Wiki)


Author’s Note. The origin of this story idea came from R.K. Narayan’s The Mahabharata. When Virata finds out that the men who have been working for him are the five Pandavas, he suddenly promises his daughter, Uttarai, to Arjuna’s son, Abhumanyu. After the nuptials, nothing more is spoken of her until the end of the epic where her son becomes the sole heir to the Pandavas. I decided to embellish on her life (and make her a little modern).  I got the idea while reading The Mahabharata and noting to myself that I didn't think it fair that the king just promised her off in a moment's notice.

In my storytelling, Uttarai does not want to marry Abhimanyu, for she loves another man. She is stubborn but wise (as you will see), and ultimately believes her father only wants the best for her.  Will she get what she wants? Or will she obey?

The picture I have selected is of a modern Indian wedding. I could not find much information on ancient wedding ceremonies, so I was a little confused on what to write when I got to the actual wedding part. Hopefully I have done this amazing culture its due justice.

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A Wedding

“I just don’t think this is fair!” Uttarai stomped over to the dressing stage. Uttarai’s maid, Jen, walked over to grab the royal dress of the day.

”Uttarai, you knew this day would come. Why are you surprised? You know it is the tradition of our land to have the suitor of a woman chosen by her father.” Jen walked around Uttarai wrapping the sari around her.

After all of her morning preparations, Uttarai began walking through the garden alone to collect her thoughts. It was unfair that she had no say in who she was to marry. She didn’t even know this man and he was supposed to be her husband next week!

She heard a man’s voice and hid behind the massive bush of pink roses. Peering through a small hole, she saw the massive man talking with one of her father’s advisors. He was handsome. An innocent smile shone on her face, and then she remembered he couldn’t even see her. He leaned over and picked up Uttarai’s small dog. He pet him gently and spoke with silliness as one does with a child. Why couldn’t she be with him? He was perfect, and she wanted him.

“This is just unfair!” Uttarai stomped back to her dressing room. She wept on Jen’s lap until no more tears would come. She regained her composure and decided to go speak with her father.

Her father was sitting merrily on his grand chair in the dining hall for breaking fast.

“My dearest daughter, what is troubling you?” King Virata took another bite of his eggs.

“Oh Father! I believe you to be a just man. Please, Father, please do not make me marry Abhimanyu!” She fell at his feet and began crying once more.

”My love, my life,” Virata caressed her hair gently, “Abhimanyu is the grandson of a God. He is mighty at war, but kind in heart. He is respectful and knows no separation of persons. These are all the traits I ever wanted in the man I gave your hand. Please, sweet Uttarai, obey my command. It is not a punishment, but a reward!”

“Father, I will obey you, but I do not wish to meet him until the day we wed. I fear I will scare him off with my endless stream of tears.” Uttarai lifted her head. She now knew there was no other way; she had to marry a man she didn’t even know.

Three days later, the wedding party met in the marble hall. As promised, Uttarai did not attend, and Virata did not call for her.

Saturday came and it was time. Jen was the one weeping this time as she got Uttarai dressed. Today, they began much earlier than normal. Uttarai had accepted her fate. Jen was a mess, and she hugging Uttarai randomly and bowing every time she leaned back to take in her masterpiece.

Uttarai walked down the grand staircase. Oh no! There was the perfect man from the garden!

“Great,” she thought, “not only do I have to marry a man I don’t want to, but now I have to do so in front of the man I truly wanted!” Her seeming smile changed to a frown. Suddenly the man walked up to her and put his arm out.

“Hello, Princess Uttarai.” He bent down and kissed her hand. “I am Abhimanyu, and you are perfect.”



Bibliography: R.K. Narayan’s The Mahabharata written in 1978.

Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Week 6 Reading Diary: continued, R.K. Narayan's The Mahabharata (Part D)

Title: The Mahabharata
Author: R.K. Narayan
Year: 1978
Part C, pages 132-176


Ganga giving Shantanu their son, Bhishma (Wiki)
Bhishma

Though Bhishma was on the wrong side of the war, I really liked him. He was so smart, and his entire purpose was to suffer on earth. I found this very sad. Even the Pandavas so dearly loved him that they went to see him right before he died. His story of how he came about blew my mind. How his father finally saved his eighth child that Ganga was going to drown was mesmerizing. I don’t even know what I would write about, but I like Bhishma. I think it is so neat that his mother is Ganga, and also that he has been allowed to choose when he would die.


Epilogue – Re-vamped

I enjoyed the epilogue given in the book, but I think I would like to write my own. I have never done so, and I think it would be a new and exciting story type to try for storytelling. This area is left open to so many possibilities. I could change how they died, or introduce other people’s children/lineage and change up who later ruled Hastinapur.

I am not a huge fan or war in writing. but I don’t mind it in movies or television.  When reading roughly the last 20 pages of The Mahabharata, I kept getting confused about who was who, and what side each person was on (there were WAY too many names to remember exactly who was on what side). Because of this, I could not get into what I was reading during most of the war.

Monday, February 22, 2016

Week 6 Reading Diary: continued, R.K. Narayan's The Mahabharata (Part C)


Title: The Mahabharata
Author: R.K. Narayan
Year: 1978
Part C, pages 85-131
Draupadi from Mahabharata (Wiki)

Wedding between Abhimanyu and Uttarai

This could be a fun story. Maybe the climax could be that she refused to marry a man she didn’t know (super modern, right?) but then she meets him without knowing it was her future husband and falls in love with him. Then she goes to her father to convince him to not force her to marry this “dreadful guy” (who is actually the one she loves). The end could be really cute, where he walks in after spying on her talking. Or her father forces her anyway, and as she walks down the aisle, her true love is waiting at the end.

Duryodhana Dies

This man drives me crazy. Because of this, I would not be upset if he died before this apparent “war” even starts. One possibility is that he is killed by Arjuna. Arjuna said that he would not be the first to shoot an arrow, so if Drona or Duryodhana do it first. If this happens, Arjuna has the perfect explanation to take both of their lives. This might not be a great story idea, because I know he will probably end up dying. I guess I will just have to wait and see!

Draupadi’s Gandharvas – A Children’s Story

This could be the story of Draupadi and her gandharvas, but a much more child friendly version (instead of her getting abused and the brother getting killed for it). One possibility might be a small girl who really does have five gandharvas, and there are various scenarios where she is saved because of them.



Saturday, February 20, 2016

Thoughts about Comments

My favorite kind of comment on one of my stories has multiple parts.  They don't always have to be the same parts, but a variation of comment type is just what I need for proper feedback.  The most helpful is whether a person enjoyed the story or not.  The second is their favorite/least favorite parts, and the third is any advice.  The most helpful thing in a comment is when someone provides a kind but constructive criticism.  This way, I am able to fix what is needed.

In the beginning, I tried to only say the nicest things in comments. With time, I realized it is perfectly fine to still be kind and honest about a persons writing, but throw in some curve balls too.  Sometimes it is a question on the plot or with a character, and other times it is just a question I want to know.  This way a person can fill in any plot holes they have.

Thursday, February 18, 2016

Week 5 Storytelling: A Woman in Exile

Draupadi's Diary

Day 1 of Year 1

I cannot believe What Yudhishthira has done to us, to me! Even after I saved him from his gambling addiction and convinced King Dhritarashtra to release us, he still returned once more to get us exiled…FOR THIRTEEN YEARS!!!


Day 14 of Year 1

We have been walking through this forest for quite some time now. My husbands are growing weary, as am I. I should not be living the life of a hermit, I am a royal! Yudhishthira has been trudging around for days now. No one will speak to him, and this is beginning to weigh on him. It is unfair for him to be labeled the leader just by being the oldest, but that is how society works.


Day 312 of Year 1

My time with Yudhishthira is coming to an end. I have finally released my underlying grudge for him by washing in the Ganga. I fasted for two days, and did nothing but pray. Upon leaving the glorious river, I felt like a new woman. I approached my husband and he noticed the change as well. He sent the others away so we could spend some happy time together. I have to start focusing on the positive.


Day 1 of Year 2

Today is my first day with Bhima. This is one of my least favorite parts of having five husbands. My relationship with Yudhishthira grew the most ever has in these last few months, and now I am supposed to forget it all and get reacquainted with the man I have not been with in four years! I truly love Bhima, so I will not complain. He was so excited to see me, to be with me, to be able to think of me all he wants again; I must not take this overflowing love for granted.


Day 1 of Year 3

Now it is Arjuna’s year. We as a caravan are getting very good at coming up with games to play, and things to do. There are blooms on the trees, and the birds sing such glorious songs. Though I am anxious for my husbands to defeat Duryodhana and his army so we may return to the throne, it is days like today that I understand the life of a hermit. Arjuna made us a picnic and we went alone to a beautiful green spot by the river flowing from the mountain. It was a wonderful way to start our year. Though I would never admit it aloud, Arjuna is my favorite husband to be with.


Day 1 of Year 4

Nakula was so anxious to attain me today that he had me blushing in front of everyone with his sweet words. Every year has gone by faster and faster. I do hope it slows down a little, because I don’t want my life to suddenly end because I was wishing it away.


Day 1 of Year 5

After this year, the cycle of my husband’s begins all over again. I am so ready to be with Sahadeva, for I love him dearly. Hopefully I will not bear a child while in this forest. We have moved once more to a beautiful area, but I am ready for the life I was supposed to live.


Draupadi and the five Pandavas (Wiki)

Author’s Note: I have not written a diary story before now, and to be honest I am not a huge fan. I couldn’t figure out how to add climax and resolution to the story, so for now it looks like I just filled in a few gaps in the 12 years I have read thus far. I got the idea to do a diary because I have read another student’s diary storytelling post and I really enjoyed it.

I chose to make Draupadi very stubborn in this diary. She had a right to be mad at Yudhishthira, but at many points she was completely blowing up. In The Mahabharata, she made numerous statements that basically stated she was severely being mistreated because she was supposed to be a royal and live in a palace. Based on what I have read thus far, she has always been pretty spoiled where ever she ends up.

The picture I have selected is of Draupadi and her five husbands.  I couldn't find one of her in exile.  I really enjoy this picture because it is all the main characters in her diary in one picture.


Bibliography: R.K. Narayan’s The Mahabharata written in 1978.

Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Week 5 Reading Diary: continued, R.K. Narayan's The Mahabharata (Part B)

Title: The Mahabharata
Author: R.K. Narayan
Year: 1978
Part B
Draupadi from The Mahabharata (Wiki)

Draupadi's Diary: A Woman in Exile

This would be a new story type I have not tried.  I believe it would be a great idea to give more insight into what the one woman in this caravan was thinking when alone.  She makes many of her thoughts clear in the beginning of the exile, but little is known of what happened throughout.  If she is still switching husbands every year, I could make five entry posts about the five different husbands and how they vary from each other.

Duryodhana

I don't exactly know what I would write about this guy, but I really am starting to hate him (though this was probably the authors intent).  He is vile, and untrustworthy in all senses of the word.  I believe the book explains it best when calling him a jackal over and over.  I'm sure I could come up with a great story out of the passionate hate I have developed for this apparent antagonist.  I really want to write an ending now where he just dies, but I have a feeling something bad is going to happen after the curse put on him at the end of chapter 8.

Arjuna With Indra

I really enjoyed reading about how Indra took his son in and helped him in every way he could (though oddly, he even tried to hand him a hooker...unsuccessfully).  If I were to choose to write about Arjuna's time here, I would have a lot of freedom for creativity, because very little was written for a total of a five year stay.

Week 5 Reading Diary: R.K. Narayan's The Mahabharata (Part A)

Title: The Mahabharata
Author: R.K. Narayan
Year: 1978

Part A
Vyasa telling the story of The Mahabharata (Wiki)

Ganga Raises Devavratha

This possible story could be the few years where Ganga takes Devavratha into the river to train him.  Maybe it could include some other Gods he met while preschool age, and a more in-depth version of the things he learned while with his mother.  There could even be a part where Santanu is waiting at the river impatiently every week, hoping his son would appear.

Arjuna vs. Karna
This is way off normal track, but this could be a story where King Dhritarashtra literally sees things for the first time where he keeps dreaming of fights between Arjuna and Karna, where each subsequent duel is more realistic, and more compelling.  Dhritarashtra is confused, and tells no one but his wife, who is at a loss for what to do.  One day, the King dreams that Arjuna is dueling his son, Duryodhana, and he is nearly stricken with death at the thought.

More About Draupadi

There is an excerpt in the book that is a mini story telling of Draupadi's previous life as Nalayani.  I think it would be a fun idea to expand on this small portion of the text.  I think giving her a more realistic and exciting front would be interesting, as not too much is said about her.  I could do the flip of this, and make something similar to a diary entry, one entry for each husband she has.  I might not be able to do this yet, because I am just now to the part where they decide how she will be split up.

Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Week 4 Storytelling: Bharat, A Future Undecided

“My sweetest husband, I believe it is time to retire to the forest,” Shakuntala said gently to Dushmanta, her husband of twenty years.

“Though I enjoy the life of the palace, a hermitage is my home, and my aging body yearns for it,” she continued.

“For you, my dearest wife, I would do anything. But how should we know if our offspring is ready for the heavy duties of a king? How will we know if it is still too much for him? What if he is an unjust King, how will I live?” Dushmanta emotionally asked.

“We will test him.” Shakuntala stated, as if a light had come on, for she glowed with the essence of her idea.

“I’ve got it!” he yelled. “We will see if it is his heart of gold he will lead with, or if he has selfish intentions. We will send him to Jabro, the poorest area of our city, and put him with a harsh servant who does not do all he asks, as he is used to. She will be our eyes; only then will we see the true heart our son possesses.”

“Very well, my greatest, see it through,” Shakuntala stated, after pondering idea. It seemed harsh, but in the end, it truly would test his temper, as well as his compassion for others.

So Dushmanta went to his favorite nurse, Jana, and asked if she knew anyone that would be fit to fulfill this deed. As it would be, she did: a fellow nurse by the name of Seila. She was an older woman, but not frail. She was strong and level-headed. Dushmanta and Shakuntala met with Seila and explained all they needed from her. She feared them initially (because of their royal status), but she realized by the end that all they wanted was to know that their son was truly ready to rule a kingdom.

The following week Bharat showed up to the home he would be staying at while conducting royal duties his father set for him. When he got out of the chariot he stood curiously at the door, and read the name of the inn repeatedly. It was nothing more than a shack, and he wondered if someone even lived there. Nevertheless, he decided to go in.

“Hello? Is anyone here? I was told I am to be expected.  My name is Bharat,” he stated as he walked through the door. His eyes widened.  The decor did not improve from outside to in; it actually got worse!

“I am Seila. And look here! You didn’t even wipe your shoes off!” a woman smarled as she turned the corner. “Go through that door there and set your stuff down, and then please come help me wash up for dinner.” She pointed to a sheet on the wall over a hole that Bharat could only assume was the door spoken of.

“Madam…” Bharat began, but he soon decided it was not worth the words. He did not believe she meant to be harsh, but rather, firm. He was about to remind her who he was, but he wanted to see how the night went. He set his belongings on the cot and returned to the main room.

Seila put a pot of chicken on the kindled fire. “Please finish the washing of these dishes and when you’re done let’s head to the river for the some cool drinks.” 

Bharat considered what his father and mother would do in this situation. Despite the small fire brewing inside him, he realized that she had lived a life much harder than his, and she deserved to be a little bitter. Maybe he could help her out.

Finally, he walked over to the grand pot with dirty dishes in it and began cleaning them.

"I must find a way to help this woman," he thought to himself. "What can I do to show her that we, the royal family, still care for her?"

Bharat and Seila cleaned and cooked in silence, until Bharat broke had an idea.

“Dearest Seila, it is clear you have lived a hard and tiresome life, but you have stayed devoted to your King through it all. For that, I want to give you my favorite ring.” He removed the diamond-encrusted gold band from his finger, and placed it in her palm.

She stood wide-eyed, in shock. She did not expect this at all.

From the moment Dushmanta and Shakuntala found out their son’s great reverence, they knew his purity of heart was true. Dushmanta made Bharat the King, and his reign was peaceful.  He was such a great king that the country of India still bears his name today.

Indian King (Wikipedia)


Author's Note. This story is a small piece of a larger story, with the main piece coming from Nine Ideal Indian Women: Sita, Promila, and Shakuntala.  This idea came from the third story, Shakuntala.  I was so entranced during this story that I'm not sure if I blinked the whole way through!   I enjoyed the plot and story line too much, so I decided not to make any changes to those.  Instead, I decided to add a little fill where there was nothing more than a paragraph (the one at the end where Bharat suddenly grows up, becomes king, and has a great reign).  

The ring in this story was not selected by chance; in the story of Shakuntala and Dushmanta, Dushmanata married Shakuntala in the forest and gives her a ring so his men could come back and get her.  He became cursed to forget the one he loved until a token of his love (the ring!) was shown to him.  Shakuntala lost it, and Dushmanta did not recognize her when she went to find him while very pregnant with their son, Bharat.  A few years later, some fisherman find the ring and it is returned to Dushmanta.  Once he sees the ring, he realizes what he had done and he finds Shakuntala and Bharat.  Later in life, Dushmanta gave this ring to Bharat.  This is why this ring is so important!  

The picture I selected was done so very carefully.  I did many searches for both Bharat and Shakuntala, where I almost always attained the same few pictures that I had already seen (though they didn't fit the idea I had in my head).  I finally got the idea to look up Indian Kings, and I went through a few before I found a picture of one I thought looked noble enough to look similar to the gentle King Bharat.  If you want to read more about King Shivaji (pictured), see here.


Bibliography. This story's characters come from Nine Ideal Indian Women: Sita, Promila, and Shakuntala by Sunity Devee in 1919.

Week 4 Reading Diary, continued: Nine Ideal Indian Women: Sita, Promila, and Shakuntala

Title: Nine Ideal Indian Women: Sita, Promila, and Shakuntala
Author: Sunity Devee
Year: 1919

Part B: Promila and Shakuntala

Indrajit’s Rage

This is slightly gruesome, but I could write a story where the kingdom sent repeated messengers to tell Indrajit of the grave state of Lanka and his giant brother, but he never believed them and killed them. Then, finally, someone he knows, his sweet old nurse as a child comes, and he believes her. This is nothing more than an expansion on the current story, giving it a more detailed reason as to why he wouldn’t believe anyone.

Promila – The Alternate Ending 

The ending of this broke my heart. Even though they were technically the bad guys, the writers of this story really made me root for Indrajit and Promila’s love. Though still sad, this alternate ending would consist of Indrajit still dying (because, well, he has to so Rama can win), but Promila becomes a strong woman, and lives out her days with her maidens in paradise. I could discuss how she came to this decision, and the journey back. 
Promila and Her Maidens (Nine Ideal Indian Women)


Bharat Becomes King

In this side story, I would show the transition to when Bharat, the son of Dushmanta and Shakuntala, goes from prince to King. Maybe a series of tests? Or his father is waiting for something specific? Maybe someone made a prediction on what Dushmanta and Shakuntala were looking for to know the time their son should be king. I plan on making his demeanor and attitude to all people the same that his mothers would be. At the end, Dushmanta and Shakuntala will retire to the forest as hermits, just as the prediction.

Saturday, February 6, 2016

Week 4 Reading Diary: Nine Ideal Indian Women: Sita, Promila, and Shakuntala

Title: Nine Ideal Indian Women: Sita, Promila, and Shakuntala
Author: Sunity Devee
Year: 1919

Rama and Sita (taken from Nine Ideal Indian Women)


Rama’s Side of the Story


How was Rama feeling when he was about to pull the bow? This is what I wondered the entire time I was reading the part where all the people were attempting to pull the bow. The book gives Sita’s account, thoughts, and prayers, but not Rama’s. I think this would make a great story for storytelling; showing how Rama felt walking up to the bow, grabbing it, looking at Sita. I could describe the palace, the bow, and Sita, but all from Rama’s point of view.

A Day in the Life of Sita: A Captive

What does Sita see while she is in the cage? How do the Rakshasa's treat her? How is Samara able to visit, and where did she come from? I had many question while reading the parts where Samara was visiting with Sita. I found out Samara is Bibhisan’s wife, and Bibhisan is Ravana’s brother (though he sided with Rama in the war). I could go into further detail on their gossip and doings. Also, Samara could bring her things and food to keep her healthy despite being punished by the rakshasi’s.

Sita’s Disappearance

The part where Sita gets sucked into the earth was much more descriptive in this story. It made a lot more sense here than in the PDE Ramayana, but it made it that much harder to read. I think it would be a good story to elaborate on how Sita went into the earth. It would not be super long in terms of story time, but it would be incredibly descriptive, describing what people were feeling a
nd seeing.

Thursday, February 4, 2016

Week 3 Storytelling: Being Kumbhakarna

Being Kumbhakarna

“I’m hungry.” Karna sighed. His real name was Kumbhakarna, but his friends called his Karna. He was over 100 feet tall, but in human form. He hated being so big; it wasn’t fair. He grabbed another berry bush, shook them all into his mouth, and tossed it a mile or so away. He had already eaten 20 deer for breakfast and lunch, but it just wasn’t enough.

He did not like being a Rakshasa. Ravana was so mean and powerful; he acted like his parent just because he was the king of the Rakshasa’s. Because of Ravana, Karna was trying to hide in the forest. He didn’t want to eat anyone else. When Ravana had a prisoner he wanted to disappear he made Karna eat them! He threatened that if he didn’t, he would take away all his food for a week, which was persuasion enough to poor Karna, who was always hungry.

Boom Crunch! Boom Crunch!
With every step, he felt as if he might we waking the whole world. He saw a large boulder and took a seat. He began to weep uncontrollably. His tears fell like a river amongst the ancient trees, and began to flow through the land.

Suddenly, the God Indra came riding in on his white elephant.

“Karna! You are flooding the forest! Pretty soon, there will be no food left!” Indra yelled. Karna’s sobs were much too loud to hear Indra. The water was so high that the flow was beginning to bend the trees.

Indra did not like Karna. He was too large, making him capable of incredible, possibly terrible, things. Indra threw his lightning thunderbolt as hard as he could at Karna’s shoulder. He did not want to kill him, just get his attention.

Karna was hit suddenly, and his self-pity turned to anger.

“Who dare attack the mighty Karna!” His voice boomed throughout the forest as far as the eye could see.

Indra pushed past the burst of air that came from Karna.

“I did Karna! But I did it not to hurt you! You could not hear me yelling, and you were flooding all the land!” Indra yelled, trying to keep the peace.

Karna did not want to hear his explanation. This man hurt him! Why would he do such a thing? He swung his mighty hand down to grab the attacker, and held him up high into the air. He did not recognize his crazy man who would wound a giant, but he would teach him.

Indra had had enough. “Karna, because of your raging anger, you will now sleep half a years moons and Suns at a time, only waking to feast. This will keep you from hurting anyone with your stature and temper!”

Suddenly Karna’s eyes became incredibly heavy. He began to fall, as if in slow motion. Indra made it safely to the ground via the cushion of Karna’s massive hand in the fall. Conveniently, Karna’s head landed on the boulder gently as if it were made to be his pillow. A loud snore bellowed from the beast, and until his demise, the curse stayed put.

Indra walked away, smirking. Finally, I have rid of this horrid beast.


Author’s Note: Kumbhakarna was the brother of Ravana (the Rakshasa King) in the Ramayana. In the legend, Kumbhakarna had the curse to sleep for 6 months at a time because of a misheard boon. I decided to change it up, and, because Indra doesn’t like Kumbhakarna, still make Indra the reason he must sleep for eternity, but have it happen in a different way.

Bibliography. This is based on the character Kumbhakarna in the PDE Ramayana.

Monday, February 1, 2016

Week 3 Reading Diary, continued: PDE Ramayana, Part D

These are my notes for sections 61-80 in the PDE Ramayana (Part D). Here I have come up with three more options for week 3 Storytelling assignment.

Being Kubhakarna

For some reason I felt bad for the giant. I know he was not nice, but what if it was because of the curse put on him to just sleep and eat? In this storytelling idea, I would talk about a day in the life of a giant (pre-curse and war). The ending could be what happened that forced him to get cursed.


Brahma’s Weapon
This story would fit right in with my Storybook idea of celestial weapons. The first was when Rama was granted access to weapons to defeat the Rakshasa’s during his exile. This weapon is one that Brahma created out of fire so that the Rakshasa king Ravana could be defeated. With the grand story behind this weapon, it could be a story on it’s own.

Alternate Ending

I absolutely hated how this story ended. Maybe I am just too modern, but Rama is a chauvinistic jerk who is entitled and entirely subject to peer pressure. He saw Sita in her purity, and it was proved, but he still chose to listen to those around him. In my ending, I would resume after she proves herself in the fire, then let them go back to the palace. When people tried to question her, Rama would stand up for the woman he married, and that would be the end of that gossip. They would still have twins, and Valmiki would have moved to the palace for guidance in the children’s lives. This would still give an end where the Ramayana became a song and was passed on for generations.