Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts

Thursday, February 25, 2016

Week 6 Storytelling: Uttarai's Sacrifice

An Indian Wedding (Wiki)


Author’s Note. The origin of this story idea came from R.K. Narayan’s The Mahabharata. When Virata finds out that the men who have been working for him are the five Pandavas, he suddenly promises his daughter, Uttarai, to Arjuna’s son, Abhumanyu. After the nuptials, nothing more is spoken of her until the end of the epic where her son becomes the sole heir to the Pandavas. I decided to embellish on her life (and make her a little modern).  I got the idea while reading The Mahabharata and noting to myself that I didn't think it fair that the king just promised her off in a moment's notice.

In my storytelling, Uttarai does not want to marry Abhimanyu, for she loves another man. She is stubborn but wise (as you will see), and ultimately believes her father only wants the best for her.  Will she get what she wants? Or will she obey?

The picture I have selected is of a modern Indian wedding. I could not find much information on ancient wedding ceremonies, so I was a little confused on what to write when I got to the actual wedding part. Hopefully I have done this amazing culture its due justice.

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A Wedding

“I just don’t think this is fair!” Uttarai stomped over to the dressing stage. Uttarai’s maid, Jen, walked over to grab the royal dress of the day.

”Uttarai, you knew this day would come. Why are you surprised? You know it is the tradition of our land to have the suitor of a woman chosen by her father.” Jen walked around Uttarai wrapping the sari around her.

After all of her morning preparations, Uttarai began walking through the garden alone to collect her thoughts. It was unfair that she had no say in who she was to marry. She didn’t even know this man and he was supposed to be her husband next week!

She heard a man’s voice and hid behind the massive bush of pink roses. Peering through a small hole, she saw the massive man talking with one of her father’s advisors. He was handsome. An innocent smile shone on her face, and then she remembered he couldn’t even see her. He leaned over and picked up Uttarai’s small dog. He pet him gently and spoke with silliness as one does with a child. Why couldn’t she be with him? He was perfect, and she wanted him.

“This is just unfair!” Uttarai stomped back to her dressing room. She wept on Jen’s lap until no more tears would come. She regained her composure and decided to go speak with her father.

Her father was sitting merrily on his grand chair in the dining hall for breaking fast.

“My dearest daughter, what is troubling you?” King Virata took another bite of his eggs.

“Oh Father! I believe you to be a just man. Please, Father, please do not make me marry Abhimanyu!” She fell at his feet and began crying once more.

”My love, my life,” Virata caressed her hair gently, “Abhimanyu is the grandson of a God. He is mighty at war, but kind in heart. He is respectful and knows no separation of persons. These are all the traits I ever wanted in the man I gave your hand. Please, sweet Uttarai, obey my command. It is not a punishment, but a reward!”

“Father, I will obey you, but I do not wish to meet him until the day we wed. I fear I will scare him off with my endless stream of tears.” Uttarai lifted her head. She now knew there was no other way; she had to marry a man she didn’t even know.

Three days later, the wedding party met in the marble hall. As promised, Uttarai did not attend, and Virata did not call for her.

Saturday came and it was time. Jen was the one weeping this time as she got Uttarai dressed. Today, they began much earlier than normal. Uttarai had accepted her fate. Jen was a mess, and she hugging Uttarai randomly and bowing every time she leaned back to take in her masterpiece.

Uttarai walked down the grand staircase. Oh no! There was the perfect man from the garden!

“Great,” she thought, “not only do I have to marry a man I don’t want to, but now I have to do so in front of the man I truly wanted!” Her seeming smile changed to a frown. Suddenly the man walked up to her and put his arm out.

“Hello, Princess Uttarai.” He bent down and kissed her hand. “I am Abhimanyu, and you are perfect.”



Bibliography: R.K. Narayan’s The Mahabharata written in 1978.

Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Week 6 Reading Diary: continued, R.K. Narayan's The Mahabharata (Part D)

Title: The Mahabharata
Author: R.K. Narayan
Year: 1978
Part C, pages 132-176


Ganga giving Shantanu their son, Bhishma (Wiki)
Bhishma

Though Bhishma was on the wrong side of the war, I really liked him. He was so smart, and his entire purpose was to suffer on earth. I found this very sad. Even the Pandavas so dearly loved him that they went to see him right before he died. His story of how he came about blew my mind. How his father finally saved his eighth child that Ganga was going to drown was mesmerizing. I don’t even know what I would write about, but I like Bhishma. I think it is so neat that his mother is Ganga, and also that he has been allowed to choose when he would die.


Epilogue – Re-vamped

I enjoyed the epilogue given in the book, but I think I would like to write my own. I have never done so, and I think it would be a new and exciting story type to try for storytelling. This area is left open to so many possibilities. I could change how they died, or introduce other people’s children/lineage and change up who later ruled Hastinapur.

I am not a huge fan or war in writing. but I don’t mind it in movies or television.  When reading roughly the last 20 pages of The Mahabharata, I kept getting confused about who was who, and what side each person was on (there were WAY too many names to remember exactly who was on what side). Because of this, I could not get into what I was reading during most of the war.

Monday, February 22, 2016

Week 6 Reading Diary: continued, R.K. Narayan's The Mahabharata (Part C)


Title: The Mahabharata
Author: R.K. Narayan
Year: 1978
Part C, pages 85-131
Draupadi from Mahabharata (Wiki)

Wedding between Abhimanyu and Uttarai

This could be a fun story. Maybe the climax could be that she refused to marry a man she didn’t know (super modern, right?) but then she meets him without knowing it was her future husband and falls in love with him. Then she goes to her father to convince him to not force her to marry this “dreadful guy” (who is actually the one she loves). The end could be really cute, where he walks in after spying on her talking. Or her father forces her anyway, and as she walks down the aisle, her true love is waiting at the end.

Duryodhana Dies

This man drives me crazy. Because of this, I would not be upset if he died before this apparent “war” even starts. One possibility is that he is killed by Arjuna. Arjuna said that he would not be the first to shoot an arrow, so if Drona or Duryodhana do it first. If this happens, Arjuna has the perfect explanation to take both of their lives. This might not be a great story idea, because I know he will probably end up dying. I guess I will just have to wait and see!

Draupadi’s Gandharvas – A Children’s Story

This could be the story of Draupadi and her gandharvas, but a much more child friendly version (instead of her getting abused and the brother getting killed for it). One possibility might be a small girl who really does have five gandharvas, and there are various scenarios where she is saved because of them.